I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Captain's Log, Stardate 08.31.2006 TMI: Writing: Please pray, I’m working hard on my second book’s plot and stuff and it’s coming together more slowly than I’d like. Diet: I found out that the acid in blueberries eats away at my tooth enamel! I’m so bummed! Blueberries are my favorite snack. But if I eat more than a handful, my teeth become extremely sensitive at the gumline, similar to when I drink soda with citric acid. My dentist says the citric acid eats away at my enamel. Due blueberries have citric acid? Or maybe it’s ascorbic acid that’s eating at my teeth? Who knows—I now have a whole pint in my fridge that I have to get my husband to eat before they go bad. Maybe I should make muffins. Any interesting blueberry recipes? Shortbread count = 3. :(