I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Captain’s Log, Stardate 01.25.2006
I just saw the movie Serenity today with Dineen. WOW the writing is terrific. CGI is good. I think I appreciated the nuances in the movie much better because I’d seen the TV show Firefly.
The dialogue was fantastic. Funny without spoiling the mood. Phenomenal subtexting. It’s so neat to hear the unusual dialect Joss Whedon made up for his universe.
Characterization for Firefly was diverse. I personally think the conflict between characters is greater in the new Battlestar Galactica series, but Firefly had a good push-pull. The new villain in Serenity is very three-dimensional and rather unique. The writing and the casting made the character larger than life.
I also liked how Joss Whedon showed backstory, especially since the series had already set up so much characterization. Whenever backstory showed up onscreen, it was always in response to someone needing to know the information, or to a strong emotional reaction to past information come up to haunt the present. Masterfully done.
Bible in 90 Days: day 17. I’m in 1st Samuel now. It’s amazing how God allows the Israelites to have a king when they are, essentially, dissing Him. I am comprehending better how He is so much larger and unfathomable than I could ever conceive of, and I have to just trust His Spirit to lead and guide me in His ways.
Writing: I finished my synopsis last night and sent it out to a bunch of writing friends to critique. I’m worried about my character motivations. I really need them to be rock solid and it’s hard to wrap my head around it.
Diet: Had tuna sandwich for lunch (400) and then cookies while watching the movie (400?). Blech, my stomach is rebelling against the excess of sugar. Leftovers for dinner tonight. I’m still really sore from Monday’s PT session. I’m glad I canceled my session today since I had to stay up late last night to finish my proposal.
I just saw the movie Serenity today with Dineen. WOW the writing is terrific. CGI is good. I think I appreciated the nuances in the movie much better because I’d seen the TV show Firefly.
The dialogue was fantastic. Funny without spoiling the mood. Phenomenal subtexting. It’s so neat to hear the unusual dialect Joss Whedon made up for his universe.
Characterization for Firefly was diverse. I personally think the conflict between characters is greater in the new Battlestar Galactica series, but Firefly had a good push-pull. The new villain in Serenity is very three-dimensional and rather unique. The writing and the casting made the character larger than life.
I also liked how Joss Whedon showed backstory, especially since the series had already set up so much characterization. Whenever backstory showed up onscreen, it was always in response to someone needing to know the information, or to a strong emotional reaction to past information come up to haunt the present. Masterfully done.
Bible in 90 Days: day 17. I’m in 1st Samuel now. It’s amazing how God allows the Israelites to have a king when they are, essentially, dissing Him. I am comprehending better how He is so much larger and unfathomable than I could ever conceive of, and I have to just trust His Spirit to lead and guide me in His ways.
Writing: I finished my synopsis last night and sent it out to a bunch of writing friends to critique. I’m worried about my character motivations. I really need them to be rock solid and it’s hard to wrap my head around it.
Diet: Had tuna sandwich for lunch (400) and then cookies while watching the movie (400?). Blech, my stomach is rebelling against the excess of sugar. Leftovers for dinner tonight. I’m still really sore from Monday’s PT session. I’m glad I canceled my session today since I had to stay up late last night to finish my proposal.
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I agree with you on the character conflict on Battlestar. Good stuff!