I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Captain's Log, Stardate 01.18.2006
I saw Narnia tonight with fellow San Jose author Shelley Bates. (Yeah, the RITA award-winning Shelley Bates! Hehe, I love saying that.)
The movie was great! I admit, I cried at parts. I thought the acting, writing, and CGI were all well done. I'm looking forward to the other movies from the book series.
And I didn't have to leave in the middle to go to the bathroom! That's a first!
Bible in 90 days: day 10. Still in Numbers. Moses is about to die, poor guy.
Writing: Still working to get a synopsis done. Shelley and I brainstormed a bit tonight. I need to develop my heroine's spiritual arc more. I can't quite get to know her. She's slippery. Like trying to stuff an octopus in a girdle. (That one's for you, D!)
Diet: I worked myself really hard at PT today in anticipation of my dietary cheating. Ramen with lots of veggies for lunch (600 calories). Maggiano's restaurant with Shelley for dinner, but we split a salad (300?) and I only ate part of my gnocchi with tomato vodka sauce (yum! 500?). We also split a crème brulee (two billion calories).
I saw Narnia tonight with fellow San Jose author Shelley Bates. (Yeah, the RITA award-winning Shelley Bates! Hehe, I love saying that.)
The movie was great! I admit, I cried at parts. I thought the acting, writing, and CGI were all well done. I'm looking forward to the other movies from the book series.
And I didn't have to leave in the middle to go to the bathroom! That's a first!
Bible in 90 days: day 10. Still in Numbers. Moses is about to die, poor guy.
Writing: Still working to get a synopsis done. Shelley and I brainstormed a bit tonight. I need to develop my heroine's spiritual arc more. I can't quite get to know her. She's slippery. Like trying to stuff an octopus in a girdle. (That one's for you, D!)
Diet: I worked myself really hard at PT today in anticipation of my dietary cheating. Ramen with lots of veggies for lunch (600 calories). Maggiano's restaurant with Shelley for dinner, but we split a salad (300?) and I only ate part of my gnocchi with tomato vodka sauce (yum! 500?). We also split a crème brulee (two billion calories).
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Ok, you really need to put a warning before you write something like that. I spit my coffee onto my computer!