I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Captain’s Log, Stardate 01.26.2006
Bible in 90 Days: day 18. Dude, King Saul was weird. Moody. Hormonal, even.
And I do not get how these Biblical guys take so many wives. It’s just gross to me with my 21st century mindset.
Writing: Thanks to lots of great critiquers, I think I figured out a problem with my Inciting Incident, which of course influences practically everything else in the book. Now I have to rewrite the synopsis.
Diet: I had ramen for lunch, but with lots of veggies (650). I’m exhausted today, maybe cuz I’ve been staying up so late working on this proposal. I need more self-control on my food choices and portion sizes. It’s especially hard when I’m hungry, so I shouldn’t let myself get to that point.
Bible in 90 Days: day 18. Dude, King Saul was weird. Moody. Hormonal, even.
And I do not get how these Biblical guys take so many wives. It’s just gross to me with my 21st century mindset.
Writing: Thanks to lots of great critiquers, I think I figured out a problem with my Inciting Incident, which of course influences practically everything else in the book. Now I have to rewrite the synopsis.
Diet: I had ramen for lunch, but with lots of veggies (650). I’m exhausted today, maybe cuz I’ve been staying up so late working on this proposal. I need more self-control on my food choices and portion sizes. It’s especially hard when I’m hungry, so I shouldn’t let myself get to that point.