This month, I have decided to focus more on my Christian Contemporary Romantic Suspense novel, Year of the Dog, so I’ve been spending more time working on it. It’s actually an old manuscript that I submitted to Zondervan but it was never bought, and I’m rewriting/revising it as a (second) prequel novel to my Warubozu Spa Chronicles series set in Hawaii.
Here’s a little bit of what I just rewrote/edited.
This morning, her mom was about to tackle the attic when Marisol put her foot down.
“Mom, I have to go to work. I can’t spend the whole day helping you clean the house.”
“You have plenty of time. What can you possibly do all day now that you quit your job?”
“Oh, I dunno. Renovate my new facility?”
“You’re only going to have dogs there. How much renovation do you really need?”
“It would be nice if the roof didn’t leak and the windows opened and shut. Oh, and I kind of need a floor.”
I guess Marisol’s relationship with her mother isn’t getting better anytime soon …
Here’s a little bit of what I just rewrote/edited.
This morning, her mom was about to tackle the attic when Marisol put her foot down.
“Mom, I have to go to work. I can’t spend the whole day helping you clean the house.”
“You have plenty of time. What can you possibly do all day now that you quit your job?”
“Oh, I dunno. Renovate my new facility?”
“You’re only going to have dogs there. How much renovation do you really need?”
“It would be nice if the roof didn’t leak and the windows opened and shut. Oh, and I kind of need a floor.”
I guess Marisol’s relationship with her mother isn’t getting better anytime soon …
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