I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Captain's Log, Stardate 12.23.2005
I feel much better now that I can see the floor.
Naw das wot I is talkin' about!
Yim Kaimun is a young Christian woman in Singapore who emails me occasionally. She wrote this interesting article on three strong women warriors, breaking the stereotype of submissive or fantasy Chinese females. These are the kind of chickies I like to write about!
My high school kids are truly nuts
I might be the only one who thinks these guys are funny.
Ain't No Mountain
The Bathroom Door Incident
Writing: Enjoying my researching. Got a bleeding crit from Robin and I looooooove it. I am totally warped.
I feel much better now that I can see the floor.
Naw das wot I is talkin' about!
Yim Kaimun is a young Christian woman in Singapore who emails me occasionally. She wrote this interesting article on three strong women warriors, breaking the stereotype of submissive or fantasy Chinese females. These are the kind of chickies I like to write about!
My high school kids are truly nuts
I might be the only one who thinks these guys are funny.
Ain't No Mountain
The Bathroom Door Incident
Writing: Enjoying my researching. Got a bleeding crit from Robin and I looooooove it. I am totally warped.
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