I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Dear Lord, Thank You for how You have blessed us so abundantly. Please help us to know how You want us to in turn serve others. Help us to be faithful to You in doing the good works You have asked us to do. Amen.
親愛なる主よ、あなたが私たちを豊かに祝福してくださったことを感謝します。どうか、私たちが他の人々にどのように奉仕することをあなたが望んでおられるかを知ることができるようにしてください。私たちがあなたに忠実に、あなたが私たちに求めておられる良い行いをすることができるように助けてください。アーメン。
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