I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
I admit the beach doesn’t enthrall me since I grew up in Hawaii, but don’t hate me for that. :) I love forests but people who grew up in one may not find them as fascinating as I do.
Today I’m taking my Zondervan editor to the beach in Santa Cruz. I’ve only ever been to one Santa Cruz beach and I don’t remember which one it was, so I went on Yelp and decided on Natural Bridges State Beach since it had a lot of good reviews. I hope it’ll be fun!
So when you go to a beach, what do you do? I’ve only ever gone swimming but the water’s probably too cold right now, plus it’s northern California so the water will never be as warm as Hawaii. Sunbathing only makes me hot and itchy. What do you guys like to do?
Today I’m taking my Zondervan editor to the beach in Santa Cruz. I’ve only ever been to one Santa Cruz beach and I don’t remember which one it was, so I went on Yelp and decided on Natural Bridges State Beach since it had a lot of good reviews. I hope it’ll be fun!
So when you go to a beach, what do you do? I’ve only ever gone swimming but the water’s probably too cold right now, plus it’s northern California so the water will never be as warm as Hawaii. Sunbathing only makes me hot and itchy. What do you guys like to do?
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