I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Captain’s Log, Supplemental
I have a special prayer on my heart today.
Father, we come before you and lift up Case to you. Be with him at his sentencing tomorrow. I pray that all that has been prophesied will come to pass--a merciful judge with eyes to see the injustice that’s been done to Case, influencing the judge so that Case will not receive a prison term. Uphold Case in your righteous right hand. Layer your peace and grace on the family. Help them to cling tightly to you. You are the same God who parted the waters of the Red Sea. Uphold justice tomorrow for your righteous one. Thank you. Amen.
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I have a special prayer on my heart today.
Father, we come before you and lift up Case to you. Be with him at his sentencing tomorrow. I pray that all that has been prophesied will come to pass--a merciful judge with eyes to see the injustice that’s been done to Case, influencing the judge so that Case will not receive a prison term. Uphold Case in your righteous right hand. Layer your peace and grace on the family. Help them to cling tightly to you. You are the same God who parted the waters of the Red Sea. Uphold justice tomorrow for your righteous one. Thank you. Amen.
Help me title my next book! Head on over to this blog post and leave your title ideas!
Blog book giveaway:
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If the Shoe Fits by Marilynn Griffith
Eyes of Elisha by Brandilyn Collins
Win books and an iPod Nano! Contest ends in TWO DAYS! Get more info on my contest page!
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Good luck!