I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Captain's Log, Stardate 11.12.2006
Sorry guys, I only have two special men and their families on my heart today.
Father God, I lift up Bruce and Doug to you today. They have been your faithful servants. They love you and trust you, especially now in this difficult time.
Lord I pray for healing. I pray for wisdom for the doctors. I pray for your powerful hand on their bodies.
Be with their families. Give them power, grace, and strength. Strengthen their faith and trust in you. Help them to cling to you with all their strength. Hold them in your righteous right hand.
Lord, you are God. You are our Lord, our Father. We lift our feeble hands to you and uncover our hearts before you. Cover us with your Spirit and your grace. Thank you that we can pray in Jesus' holy name. Amen.
Sorry guys, I only have two special men and their families on my heart today.
Father God, I lift up Bruce and Doug to you today. They have been your faithful servants. They love you and trust you, especially now in this difficult time.
Lord I pray for healing. I pray for wisdom for the doctors. I pray for your powerful hand on their bodies.
Be with their families. Give them power, grace, and strength. Strengthen their faith and trust in you. Help them to cling to you with all their strength. Hold them in your righteous right hand.
Lord, you are God. You are our Lord, our Father. We lift our feeble hands to you and uncover our hearts before you. Cover us with your Spirit and your grace. Thank you that we can pray in Jesus' holy name. Amen.
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