I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Captain’s Log, Stardate 11.19.2006
I’m participating in the “One Thousand Gifts” list from Christian Women Online. Click on the picture to find out more about it.
51. The way my dog puts her head in my lap.
52. My Levenger fountain pen
53. The feel of a pen gliding over paper
54. The satisfaction of finding out how to automatically back up my files every day to my iPod.
55. For the way God provided a place for Heather to move to at the right time.
56. Nutella and pretzels
57. Figuring out and ordering my mom’s Christmas present, CDs
58. The way I can stick post-its on the wall to storyboard my manuscript
59. My aromatherapy candle burner
60. My aromatherapy cold-diffuser
61. For tithe paid early for once
62. My cutie pink Dooney & Bourke purse
63. High-speed internet
64. How my friend Sharon and I happened to want each other to critique our manuscripts at the same time
65. The French lavender growing in my backyard
66. My gardenia bush
67. My gladiolas
68. My friend Mary’s move back to the states
69. My friend Shelley’s recent sale of her YA series
70. That Captain Caffeine went to the grocery store today so I wouldn’t have to go
71. My leather book covers to protect my books
72. My cute rain slicker frog stuffed animal
73. The soft brown half-bear stuffed animal that Captain Caffeine bought for me, which I left behind at a hotel while traveling in Japan but which the tour director got back for me.
74. Those Nissan stainless steel travel mugs that keep my hot tea and honey very hot for very long.
75. Our wireless internet router
I’m participating in the “One Thousand Gifts” list from Christian Women Online. Click on the picture to find out more about it.51. The way my dog puts her head in my lap.
52. My Levenger fountain pen
53. The feel of a pen gliding over paper
54. The satisfaction of finding out how to automatically back up my files every day to my iPod.
55. For the way God provided a place for Heather to move to at the right time.
56. Nutella and pretzels
57. Figuring out and ordering my mom’s Christmas present, CDs
58. The way I can stick post-its on the wall to storyboard my manuscript
59. My aromatherapy candle burner
60. My aromatherapy cold-diffuser
61. For tithe paid early for once
62. My cutie pink Dooney & Bourke purse
63. High-speed internet
64. How my friend Sharon and I happened to want each other to critique our manuscripts at the same time
65. The French lavender growing in my backyard
66. My gardenia bush
67. My gladiolas
68. My friend Mary’s move back to the states
69. My friend Shelley’s recent sale of her YA series
70. That Captain Caffeine went to the grocery store today so I wouldn’t have to go
71. My leather book covers to protect my books
72. My cute rain slicker frog stuffed animal
73. The soft brown half-bear stuffed animal that Captain Caffeine bought for me, which I left behind at a hotel while traveling in Japan but which the tour director got back for me.
74. Those Nissan stainless steel travel mugs that keep my hot tea and honey very hot for very long.
75. Our wireless internet router
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